Clouds Whispering, Gibsons, Strait of Georgia, British Columbia, Canada

Fujifilm X-T2, Landscape, Poetry

by Patrick JenningsFeb 26, 201811:30 pm

Clouds Whispering

A rocky beach
A sleepy sea
A sulfur sky
And cobalt high

Clouds whispering
Breathe in the air
My body sings

With the beauty
Of existence

Clouds Whispering
Gibsons
Strait of Georgia
British Columbia, Canada

Taken during travels, 2017

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joem18b on Feb 27, 2018 at 12:02 am
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Hi, Patrick.

An irreverent comment about your poem. I was just enjoying reading it and came to this part:

My body sings

With the beauty
Of existence

Clouds Whispering
Gibsons

…and I grinned because a Gibson is (or used to be) a martini with an onion in it instead of an olive, and since i was drinking a little wine, the line just made me smile.

cheers.

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  Patrick Jennings on Feb 27, 2018 at 1:33 pm
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  <smile> Your moment, especially your description of it, made me smile. Probably with a sense of mirth equal to yours. Thank you.
  
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joem18b on Feb 27, 2018 at 1:36 pm
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🙂

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  Patrick Jennings on Feb 27, 2018 at 5:44 pm
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  =)
  
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